You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you regarding a study English
your
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school
. I am some information about
you
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school
because
i
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I
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will be joining
you
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school
few
day
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later. What is the timing
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of you
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you
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English course classes and how much
time
one
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day class
.
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Moreover
, l will be
happily
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to attend
you
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school
very soon . I sm want
to
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apply
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good accommodations for me because l will
should
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sap rate room for
my self
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and attach bathroom and
last
thing room
is
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neat and clean. Because
i
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am
hygienic
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person.
Furthermore
,
i
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am eat
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food three
time
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in
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the
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day and my diet is
mornings
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time
need a banana juice and everything
time
five
egg
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i
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will
be prefer
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. And
last
and least do not noise my room outside. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you,
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Your
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sincerely, Dharma
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