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Dear Susan, I am so happy to hear that you have been accepted at Western University for Art History 101. I know you always wanted to study artists in the Renaissance period and
this
 would be a perfect chance to do so! There are many apartments and shared housing arrangements available for students within the vicinity of the campus. I used to live with two roommates in a 2-bedroom apartment with a large hall that we divided into half. One half was used as a
third
 bedroom and the rest we shared as a living room. I suggest looking online before you come down here for places to stay. Try searching on websites like RoomStay.com or Facebook groups for university students to find suitable accommodation.
This
 way you will get to see photos of your room in advance and pack only what you need. Many of my classmates made the mistake of getting a cheap shared apartment at the cost of privacy and unfriendly housemates. If you go with the shared boarding option, please have a chat with your potential roomies and note any red flags. I hope that helps you in finding a suitable home during your studies. Good luck and take care. Love, Zainab
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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