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Dear Susan, I am so happy to hear that you have been accepted at Western University for Art History 101. I know you always wanted to study artists in the Renaissance period and

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would be a perfect chance to do so! There are many apartments and shared housing arrangements available for students within the vicinity of the campus. I used to live with two roommates in a 2-bedroom apartment with a large hall that we divided into half. One half was used as a

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bedroom and the rest we shared as a living room. I suggest looking online before you come down here for places to stay. Try searching on websites like RoomStay.com or Facebook groups for university students to find suitable accommodation.

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way you will get to see photos of your room in advance and pack only what you need. Many of my classmates made the mistake of getting a cheap shared apartment at the cost of privacy and unfriendly housemates. If you go with the shared boarding option, please have a chat with your potential roomies and note any red flags. I hope that helps you in finding a suitable home during your studies. Good luck and take care. Love, Zainab

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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