Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, environmental issues have become a critical topic of discussion among people and
ministry
. It is thought that only governments and organizations can have the influence to protect their surroundings, which citizens don’t be able to do. I strongly disagree with Correct article usage
the ministry
this
point and believe that saving our natural habitat is every human being’s obligation. Along with governments and industries’ effort
, we can make a huge improvement.
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efforts
Firstly
, people can play several roles to perform in protecting the environment, which starting
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starts
from
small changes like throwing their garbage at the proper trash bins, Change preposition
with
instead
of leaving it at
wherever they feel convenient. Change preposition
apply
Otherwise
, refuses can harm the habitat, especially, those are
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such
as plastic, glass and metal. It has been proven in practice via many news about marine creatures are facing with
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plastic-rubbish
that tourists left. Correct your spelling
plastic rubbish
In addition
, citizens can start to use products that
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made
of recyclable materials, Add a missing verb
are made
for example
, paper/ fabric bags, replacing plastic
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the plastic
bag
. Fix the agreement mistake
bags
As a result
, individuals’ efforts can make a massive impact on the environment.
Secondly
, from
the part of administrations and companies, there are much more impacts they can carry out for saving the Earth. Change preposition
on
For instance
, governments can issue policies for restricting the use of single-use plastic,
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on
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in
technology
of industrial waste treatment, converting rubbish to energy and avoiding polluting the climate.
In conclusion, everyone on the Earth is responsible for enhancing the habitat, and Add an article
the technology
this
challenging task only can be achieved with the contribution of individuals, ministries, and organizations. Every our
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matter
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protecting our living environment.Change preposition
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