Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environmental issues have become a critical topic of discussion among people and

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. It is thought that only governments and organizations can have the influence to protect their surroundings, which citizens don’t be able to do. I strongly disagree with

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point and believe that saving our natural habitat is every human being’s obligation. Along with governments and industries’

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, we can make a huge improvement.

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, people can play several roles to perform in protecting the environment, which

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from

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small changes like throwing their garbage at the proper trash bins,

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of leaving it

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wherever they feel convenient.

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, refuses can harm the habitat, especially, those

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made of non-degradable materials

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as plastic, glass and metal. It has been proven in practice via many news about marine creatures are facing

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dangers, which be caused by

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that tourists left.

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, citizens can start to use products

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made

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of recyclable materials,

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, paper/ fabric bags, replacing

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.

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, individuals’ efforts can make a massive impact on the environment.

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,

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the part of administrations and companies, there are much more impacts they can carry out for saving the Earth.

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, governments can issue policies for restricting the use of single-use plastic

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and encouraging using environmental-friendly products. While companies can invest their money

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technology

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of industrial waste treatment, converting rubbish to energy and avoiding polluting the climate. In conclusion, everyone on the Earth is responsible for enhancing the habitat, and

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challenging task only can be achieved with the contribution of individuals, ministries, and organizations. Every

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effort, whether large or small, is

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to

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protecting our living environment.