Government should spent money on elementary school while other people say that it should be spent on high school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a debatable topic among many people

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where to spend money by

governments

on elementary

schools

or high

schools

.

This

essay will delve deeper into these viewpoints along with my opinion in the conclusion.

To begin

with, there are multifarious reasons why a section of society is in favour of spending

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on elementary

schools

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administration

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. Primarily, elementary

schools

can build up the base of

students

so providing a good staff with appropriate facilities

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learning is essential. Elementary

students

can easily get bored if the study techniques are not interesting. So, to make these interesting,

funds

are necessary to be spent by

governments

.

In addition

, hygiene is another major factor that requires

funds

in elementary

schools

since

students

of these

schools

are too small to understand how to maintain cleanliness so

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staff and equipment are required for it along with medical facilities.

For example

, special medical vaccinations are provided at elementary

schools

with the help of government funding in many developing nations to ensure the good health of

students

. On the other side, a section of society

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raised a concern about allotting an adequate fund for high

schools

as they believe that

such

schools

require

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good infrastructure to provide a good standard of education there.

For example

,

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of government

funds

for computerized labs with internet connectivity is necessary to connect the

students

with the modern world.

Moreover

, in these

schools

,

students

can select sports like cricket, football and hockey which not only require a lot of space but

also

funds

for sports competitions and adequate equipment. If

governments

assist

such

schools

financially,

this

may become the base

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making professional players in the future.

Hence

, there is a need for huge financial aid for high

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governments

. To conclude, though some people opine that

governments

should spend

funds

on elementary

schools

, others believe

such

financial aid should be for high

schools

. I personally believe that both high and elementary

schools

contribute to the education system so

governments

should spend money on both as per their requirement.