Government should spent money on elementary school while other people say that it should be spent on high school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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where to spend money by

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on elementary

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or high

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.

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essay will delve deeper into these viewpoints along with my opinion in the conclusion.

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with, there are multifarious reasons why a section of society is in favour of spending

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on elementary

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administration

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. Primarily, elementary

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can build up the base of

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so providing a good staff with appropriate facilities

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learning is essential. Elementary

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can easily get bored if the study techniques are not interesting. So, to make these interesting,

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are necessary to be spent by

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, hygiene is another major factor that requires

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in elementary

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since

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of these

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are too small to understand how to maintain cleanliness so

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staff and equipment are required for it along with medical facilities.

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, special medical vaccinations are provided at elementary

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with the help of government funding in many developing nations to ensure the good health of

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. On the other side, a section of society

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raised a concern about allotting an adequate fund for high

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as they believe that

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require

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good infrastructure to provide a good standard of education there.

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of government

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for computerized labs with internet connectivity is necessary to connect the

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with the modern world.

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, in these

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,

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can select sports like cricket, football and hockey which not only require a lot of space but

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for sports competitions and adequate equipment. If

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assist

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financially,

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may become the base

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making professional players in the future.

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, there is a need for huge financial aid for high

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governments

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. To conclude, though some people opine that

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should spend

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on elementary

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, others believe

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financial aid should be for high

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. I personally believe that both high and elementary

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contribute to the education system so

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should spend money on both as per their requirement.