The government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree?

In

this

contemporary world,

traffic

jam is the major brutal issue around the world wherever people

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travel to their workplaces or other destinations, unfortunately, they have to face

traffic

congestions

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in their busy routines.

Moreover

, governments in every nation have attempted to get proper plans and schemes and people believe that these sectors should want to spend money to construct

railway

systems rather than other

transport

methods.

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statement and eventually, I will elaborate on my opinion too.

To begin

with,

railway

transport

act as an environmental friendly rather than cars, motorcycle and so on.

Further

, when people have availability

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this

transportation, increasingly are able to use compared with private vehicles as they have space to move

particular

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destinations without facing

traffic

congestions on the road.

For example

, 5 years ago China had constructed

railway

subways to mitigate

traffic

jams and as well as reduce the carbon emissions by private vehicles.

Consequently

,

this

transport

has considerable advantages

such

as can be able to save time and money,

also

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assists to create

healthy

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atmosphere around the community.

Furthermore

, railways are definitely

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to

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built

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because it assists to move with a large capacity of passengers and commodities.

For instance

, Japan had implemented

railway

tracks along with major business market cities to

transport

manufactured products through these cities.

Therefore

, it attains to reduce

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of

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of vehicles and passengers willing to travel by train because they get more comfortability . In conclusion, from my perspective, I completely agree that government should want to use

money

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for

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develop

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railways because it has many advantages

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the public and keep

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environment around us. If we

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about

this

brutal matter , have a chance to overcome

traffic

and

pollutions

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in

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the globe.