A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear friend,
First
of all, how are you doing? hope all is well at your end. I have received your letter about the idea of going on a camping holiday and was surprised to see that you have
finally
made up your mind for the
first
time to go on comping during
this
summer. As you have asked for my advice, I suggest going to Whistler campgrounds and staying for two nights near the lake and woods would be a great thought. You will love it being isolated from the bustling town, traffic sounds and close to plenty of nature.
Although
it is hot summer, it's going to be quite colder at night. So, better to carry some good woollen quilts.
Furthermore
, it's been all over the news that due to warm weather, wild animals would be out more frequently.
Hence
, we shall carry animal spray as a precaution. I feel like I would
also
take part in
this
activity, but never mind, I will not be able to join as I would need to go to college
this
summer for a short term course on communications. Best Regards, Vamsi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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