Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Animals and

plans

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plants

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have always played a crucial role in our lives.

Accordingly

, there is an idea asserting that the main obstacles with the environment section are the lack of some creatures ,whereas others

who

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argue that there are more vital environmental issues. From my point of view, there are other serious environmental problems and in

this

,e,

essayI

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essay

essays

essay I

will write about it.

First

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and most important environmental

issue

is

air

pollution

in fact it is the biggest

issue

we have witnessed.

This

is because as every individual knows in

this

era the industrial activities and gas

emission

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emissions

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of cars have widely influenced the nature .The higher

pollution

, the less fresh

air

to

breath

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breathe

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. While the number of daily commuters in

mega cities

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megacities

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are

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rising, the

air

we

breath

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breathe

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gets more polluted can endanger our health ,and cause diseases like Asma or heart attack. N fact

air

pollution

has a straight relationship with our health .

Moreover

,

water

contamination is the

second

issue

. It is crystal clear that the

water

is our basic need, and if no clean

water

is available, humans will be in danger of extinction.

For instance

, the polluted

water

with industrial

ingridents

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ingredients

can affect not only

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the brain

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but

also

heart

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the heart

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;

thus

due to mentioned

reasons

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I am convinced that

air

pollution

and

water

contamination are the biggest environmental

issue

.

On the other hand

, it is believed that

loss

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the loss

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of some species

or

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of

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plants

are

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is

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the main

obatacles

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obstacles

obstacle

,

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because if they do not exist , it can influence

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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and wild

cycle

. Needless to say that various creatures are in a

cycle

named

wild

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the wild

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cycle

.

A

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situation in which each of these creatures

extinct

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is extinct

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, all other parts of the

cycle

will be influenced

for instance

, if bees come in distinct, the whole world will be demolished

by

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in

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less than 3 years .

As a result

of

this

knowledge,

extinction

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the extinction

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of some animals

considered

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is considered

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as

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apply

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the most important

issue

. To conclude,

although

it is assumed that endangered animal and plants

is

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are

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the

first

important

issue

,

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because

it

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they

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can affect the wild

cycle

, I am convinced that there are vital obstacles like

air

pollution

and

water

contamination as they can both affect our body ,so put us in extinction danger.