Some people feel that students perform better in school when they are rewarded, while some others feel that they perform better when they are punished.] Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Certain individuals believe that
students
improve their performance in every aspect of the field by getting rewards. Whereas,
on the other hand
, some others insist that
punishment
would be a better idea in order to improve
students
' academics. In my view, I think that reward is far more effective in comparison to
punishment
. On the
first
hand, if schools started giving punishments to
children
many
children
might perform better in their academics as well as in sports. For ,instance if parents and teachers started giving corporal
punishment
, causes pain and fear, and some others
such
as scolding or shouting at
children
force them to feel ashamed and embarrassed.
As a result
, in order to avoid being punished ,repeatedly they will try to do their work more efficiently and effectively.
Thus
punishment
leads
students
to perform well in their exams.
However
, sometimes
punishment
makes
children
's minds more negative as well as makes them violent. So,
punishment
is not a complete solution to improve
students
' performance. Another and more effective solution to make
children
better in their careers is by rewarding them with trophies, medals and certificates
this
makes them more confident and motivated to perform well consistently.
Furthermore
, material gifts
such
as toys , pocket money , or vacation trips make them happy and confident about focusing on their goals and
also
achieving their desired percentage.
Such
gifts inspire them to do more hard work so they can receive more gifts in the future. ,
Moreover
verbal appreciation
also
makes
children
feel valued because of which they perform well in tests. So rewarding would be a better idea in order to make the child successful. In conclusion, it is evident that
punishment
is necessary for
children
if they want to achieve something in their life.
However
it has some negative effects so, a better option to improve
children
's lifestyle is by rewarding them,
as a result
, they will perform well in school and it is more effective for long term purposes. If we truly wish for
children
to perform well we should reward them frequently.
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