many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people however that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In many cases, the authorities are sure that developing the economy plays a major role in the country,

nevertheless

, there are individuals who oppose

this

opinion saying that there is a great number of factors which are significant in the same

way

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both these points of view and give my own opinion on the matter.

Firstly

, I will discuss why economic progress makes the country and its citizens powerful by the example of America and

secondly

, I will explore why science is probably a key to the future. On the one hand, it can be heard from many media sources that the government's focus is economic progress and the majority of

recourses

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are highly concentrated in

this

field.

Moreover

, the authority is sure that

while

they are investing the budget into the economic sectors

this

will become a tool to influence other countries.

For example

, the best

way

to define if I am right or not is to check the current situation in the USA and perhaps the most upgraded part of Earth economically. On top of that,

this

helps them affect other small countries by

the

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way

of spreading dollars all around the world and American franchises which are located almost everywhere.

On the other hand

, there are spheres which need to be taken care of,

such

as science. It is very

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exemplified by private companies which try to create a

way

to colonize other planets or define how to produce food for the growing population.

For instance

, the problem of overpopulation or air pollution takes place in every removed part of the world.

Consequently

, if the authorities do nothing to fight it,

this

will be able to cause serious catastrophes for all human beings and the economic factor will not be important. In conclusion, from the arguments I have written

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I can say that, undoubtedly, money and finances are really necessary, but, it would be much better if we pay more attention to other types of progress.