The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.

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As you know, humans are starting the 21st
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a lot of things can change because technology is improving every time for an easier life. All the day scientists attempt to provide and invent new things ,
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: high-quality the smart cars or houses or buildings, bridges, ways , smartphones or even faster aeroplanes and training for citizens and they have a lot of plans for growing up knowledge by spending more day for exploring and research about new methods and I believe do not stop developing scientist never date. On other hand, the government has entirely tried to make the best place for R&D and they have been spending a lot of money on
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subject. since the beginning of the 20th
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some people fully used to discover new facilities for making a better life for folk,
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I suppose in the 21st-
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human will lives better because all people
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as power and nation want to make the future good for children and nobody recline of
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topic because it is must essential for everybody. in conclusion,if we want to help have a better future , we should attempt to make that by spending more money and age and in my view, the 21st
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might be the best for us with change and grow up Science.
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