Some people say that television is a very useful tool when it comes to education. Others argue that television is a much overused ineffective teacher. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.

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Nowadays, We can see

teachers

try to

use

media

studies to increase the efficiency of learning. Some people say that

television

is a very useful tool when it comes to

education

. Others argue that

television

is a much overused ineffective teacher. On the one hand,

Television

is very useful for the

education

system. Especially,

Television

which has various programmes to link to other

media

apps

such

as Youtube. From academic research, strongly information supports

media

television

can improve the standard of

education

Moreover

, there are various kinds of

media

studies on social

media

teachers

should have a duty to advise

media

studies

students

. Sincerely, some infographics or video clips on youtube had depicted efficient content more than a book. So, Presenting to

students

can make them clear in content more than studying the book.

Moreover

, In some class that has a length of time of more than one hour, the Studied research identified student will fatigue to learn and cannot concentrate compared with at the beginning of class.

Therefore

Teachers

can

use

the

television

to open some humorous

clip

or relaxing song to make children relief estimated five minutes after teaching in one hour. It will make

students

meditate again.

On the other hand

, We should confess that there are some

teachers

who overused

media

television

in ridiculous things. most of the cases appeared in developing countries that do not qualify and invite smart people to be

teachers

For example

Teachers

open a video

clip

that is

not related to the content or some video

clip

is suitable to watch play speed at home

such

as open exercise

clip

in physical

education

subject but does not invite a student to play a sport. In my opinion, the Quality of teaching is depended on the individual

teachers

. Some

teachers

use

media

television

advantage for

students

. In

this

case, I will support

this

teacher's teaching style.

However

, If

teachers

use

media

television

disadvantaged

Replace the word

disadvantages

show examples

students

. I will not support your act.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Some people say that television is a very useful tool when it comes to education. Others argue that television is a much overused ineffective teacher. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.

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