Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it , should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent times, the
crime
rates globally have been increasing. Use synonyms
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led to some people believing that every Linking Words
crime
should have fixed retribution. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, others argue that the different situations of committing a Linking Words
crime
and their motivation should be taken into account when determining Use synonyms
punishment
.
There are various benefits of having fixed penalties, one of which is the decrease in misconduct rate. Use synonyms
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is because most people will tend to panic with the implementation of rigid laws that will make them think twice before committing misconduct. Another advantage of having fixed Linking Words
punishment
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criminals
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crimes
. It is essential to ensure that no one will be discriminated against or get offended in public. Use synonyms
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punishment
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crimes
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In contrast
, it is vital to take into account the reasons behind why Linking Words
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crimes
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of all, many of them, especially teenagers who are more susceptible to feeling lonely are easily influenced by their peers. They do not have mature thinking and are not aware of the possible negative impacts of their actions. Linking Words
For instance
, there is an increasing rate of children aged 11-16 stealing and Linking Words
assault
as they are surrounded by people who do not condone these actions. It is Wrong verb form
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criminals
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behave violently and aggressively.
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crimes
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criminals
have different motives. The judiciary body should determine the Use synonyms
punishment
of each criminal based on their motives and what Use synonyms
crime
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