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You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
you
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 to express my interest
on
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 working
ot
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at
 the head office in Brussels for six months to enhance my skills. It would be a matter of immense pleasure to work
other
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 colleagues in person.
Furthermore
, the experience
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 will gain will be beneficial for the company and
rest
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 of my carrier. Working together with colleagues in a foreign country will not only be challenging but
also
 will provide me
opportunities
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with opportunities
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 to learn new
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ideas
 and develop new skills. As being abroad, my absence could lead
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to problem
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problem
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 at the office.So,
i
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 highly recommend if
other colleague
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another colleague
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 can
takeover
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take over
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 my work in case of emergency though I will be available on my daily
mails
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emails
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. I would highly appreciate
if
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 you could help me to get approvals so that
i
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 can work
in
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at
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 our head office in
brussels
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Brussels
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. Please let me know your decision.
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 faithfully, Liz.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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