It is better if an extended family for example uncle aunt grandparents are involved in a child upbringing than just parent alone. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
These days,it is a debatable topic that a child's upbringing should happen under the supervision of a joint family where all the family members included
such
as an uncle,aunt and Linking Words
grandparents
rather with their Use synonyms
parents
only.I agree with the Use synonyms
people
who believe that a joint family has a brighter impact on a kid's growth.So, They can adapt to their own culture and good behaviour, as well as Use synonyms
parents
,can concentrate on their Use synonyms
work
easily.
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Firstly
,the emotional bonding towards the entire family will be strong,it helps them to learn being respectful towards the elder Linking Words
people
,they develop good habits and Use synonyms
also
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grandparents
often tells stories about the culture of their family that way kid will have a knowledge background of his family at an early age.As he or she is surrounded by multiple Use synonyms
people
they do not feel alone and it Use synonyms
also
makes them avoid using electronic gadgets Linking Words
such
as tablets,mobile phones and watching TV.Linking Words
For instance
,the article that was published in "Times of India" mentioned that 85% of Indian kids are very respectful towards their elder pupils and Linking Words
also
they are kind.It is because most Indian children's upbringing will be in joint families.
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Furthermore
,If both the Linking Words
parents
are working they do not have much time to spend with their children and they can not concentrate on the Use synonyms
work
much as they are worried about their children being alone at home their efficiency at Use synonyms
work
will be less comparatively.If they have a big family like an aunt,uncle and Use synonyms
grandparents
to take care of the kid at home Use synonyms
such
as bringing them from school, taking them to the garden to play telling them stories and feeding them.Linking Words
parents
can Use synonyms
work
peacefully and efficiently.Use synonyms
For example
, I was brought up in a joint family I have spent most of my childhood with my Linking Words
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and aunts,So, I am very much connected to them and I know the background of our culture. Whereas my cousin spent all her childhood in a city with her working Use synonyms
parents
she has no idea what her family background is.
In conclusion, to have a well-behaved child it is important to have a joint family involved in their upbringing.So, they can stay connected and be respectful towards older Use synonyms
people
and Use synonyms
also
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parents
can continue with their Use synonyms
work
without any tension.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite