Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that huge corporations

advertise

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their products during

sport

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events

brings many drawbacks to

sports

. In my opinion, I totally disagree with that argument because of several reasons that I will mention below. First and foremost,

sport

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events

could receive

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by many companies to enhance their

events

in many terms. With the support from corporations, organizing leaders could pay more money for facilities, human resources and helping athletes during

events

.

In contrast

, they would receive higher rates

of

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selling commodities, which is a win-win situation for both sides. Hoa Phat Group is an example,

this

company sponsored more than 5 million dollars for SEA Games 31

last

year to advertise their products.

Thus

,

this

activity helps organizers receive enough finance to prepare accommodation and meals for foreign sportsmen.

Otherwise

,

this

company received the highest income from selling products which had appeared through many types of advertisements

such

as banners and broadcasts.

Secondly

, through advertising, many athletes could become famous and attract more fans, which is a beneficial aspect of the

sports

they play. Many well-played sportsmen have chances to appear in many popular brands'

advertisement

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.

As a result

, these

sport

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games and sportsmen could receive higher attention from audiences or viewers who

do

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not

concern

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frequently about

sports

and

sports

events

.

Moreover

, they could receive a high amount of finance to develop their living standards

due to

the fact that their monthly salaries are slightly lower than in different jobs.

For instance

, with the appearance in the Shopee advertisement, player A received a lot of attention and was sponsored by many brands to have enough fees to treat his injury. In conclusion,

while

many people believe that advertising during

sport

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events

have

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a negative impact on

sports

, I concur that through brands' advertisement,

sports

events

could receive enough financial support and raise the popularity of athletes and

sports

to viewers.