It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

Marriage
is a sacred bond that brings two people together. I believe it is in
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interest of both the individuals involved to get married before the
age
of 30. It is not only best for the individuals involved but
also
for
the
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society. I will
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they say, there is always a right time for things to happen. I feel
this
is applicable to
marriage
as well. In India, a person usually finishes his academics, especially
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, at the
age
of 25 or 26. Post that, he or she usually starts earning and
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on various
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decisions like how to invest in various assets, be it investments in equity markets or property or even how to save money. If a person is married before the
age
of 30, both the husband and wife can have and discuss common goals and take mutual decisions on how much of
thier
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their
income should be allocated to assets and what portion for liabilities.
Furthermore
, I feel an individual is healthier and fitter when they are younger as compared to an older individual. I feel
this
would help in family planning and help the female counterpart to bring another life into the world easily as compared to an older woman, as becoming pregnant at an older
age
can be pernicious to a woman’s health.
Also
, it helps in
runninng
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running
around the kids as it can be physically challenging at times till the kids hit the pre
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age
.
In addition
to
this
, if we talk about the circle of life, early
marriage
would
also
result in helping the couple to retire at an
age
wherein they would feel secure and can financially depend on their children who would eventually be earning at the
age
of their
retirment
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retirement
. These all are the benefits of getting married early in my view. I would conclude by saying that the earlier the better is an anecdote
that is
applicable to almost all things under the sun including
this
special bond called
marriage
.
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  • Fertility
  • Maternal health
  • Psychological stability
  • Social maturity
  • Economic benefits
  • Shared responsibilities
  • Ancestral customs
  • Cultural imperatives
  • Personal development
  • Career establishment
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