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Band 6

Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter 1. explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital 2. Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do 3.give details of when you would be available for this work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I recently came across an advert looking for a candidate to apply for a non-profit job for your esteemed hospital, I would genuinely like to be considered for
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time at my disposal after my
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 and would wish to utilise it fruitfully.
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 will reflect positively on my resume for future work prospects.
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, taking up
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 role shall be rewarding and satisfying. To highlight, my communication skills and humourous behaviour would help me to spend quality time with patients who have faced boredom, being confined to a particular hospital ward.
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, I could read them a
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 or a newspaper.
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, if allowed, I could take them out for a walk
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 the hospital premises. I am available to come on all the days in the morning,
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 would prefer evening time on the weekends, starting from
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 week. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Devika
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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