In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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tomorrow, there is no
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will order printed newspapers or
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from
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somebody
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read
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everything from online sources without selling paper-based. I do not really agree with
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statement. I have 2 reasons that are
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have different reading
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will have
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with their eyes.
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of all,
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have
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a different
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comfort
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level
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in reading.
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level
determine
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by
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the paper,
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seeing
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the article without
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a screen
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,
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and enjoying
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book
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a book
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with recent situations.
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, there
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no all
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enjoying
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reading
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book
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books
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from digital facilities.
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example
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, you read
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a book
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book
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books
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for minimizing your stress, not only for work. So, you really need
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the
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for relaxing in the recent situations, like reading
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book
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a book
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in
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the beach
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, mountains or lake. For
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reason, printed
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still
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important in the future.
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,
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have
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a problem
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problem
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problems
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with
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the eye
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eye
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eyes
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, if they have spent
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their time in digital facilities, like
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a laptop
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laptop
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laptops
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,
computer
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computers
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or smartphones.
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with its conditions, if they
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won't
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read
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book
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, so need printed
news papers
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newspapers
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or
books
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.
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, elder
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usually like
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for
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fill in their time in the day, but their age
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not support for do it. So, they will
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apply
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choose printed
newspaper
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newspapers
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or
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than digital articles. Above all, printed
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articles
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still
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are still
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important for society. In my conclusion,
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availability
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the availability
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digital
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of digital
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reading in the future, there are many
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still
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who still
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need printed
newspaper
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newspapers
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and
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. Two
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about
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comfort
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reading and problem health will be experienced for
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. Because reading
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is not
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only about
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getting
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information but
also
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enjoying
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about enjoying
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reading
for
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to
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feel
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relaxed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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