Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside? What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, the majority of developing countries be confronted with the problem that young
people
are leaving the
countryside
to live in
cities
and towns and leaving only old
people
in the
countryside
. In the following paragraph, I will explain a factor and guidelines on how to resolve
this
problem. On the one hand, Rural areas can not have a quality of education and more salary than live in
cities
and towns.
This
significant factor needs young
people
are going to
cities
and towns.
For instance
, At my university, I recognize a lot of friends from the
countryside
. So, They said universities
downtown
have better surrounding support for learning than universities in the
countryside
. Universities
downtown
supported a lot of money from the
government
more than in regions because they contain smarter human resource more than in regions.
Moreover
, Salaries in
the
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rural companies are less than in international companies that are located in
cities
. It invites young
people
to invest in
cities
more than
countryside
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.
On the other hand
,
Government
can solve
this
problem by ending of centralised governor format and decentralising to regional. Because of
government
plans a policy from the city centre that not related to rural desire. Rural areas have no efficiency to negotiate a
government
and must follow policy from a centralized system that gains benefits
downtown
more than regional.
For example
,
Government
should invest in
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rapid transport infrastructure to a regional area that will make it comfortable contact between each of the regions and make an economic value. In conclusion, I firmly that young
people
do not desire to leave their birthplace.
However
, Allocating resources from a centralized system can not make a better life for young
people
in the
countryside
as much as young
people
downtown
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