Influence of human beings on the world 's ecosystem is leaving to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are primary causes of loss of biodiversity ? What solutions can you suggest ?
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their
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species
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for
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apply
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apply
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some Change preposition
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species
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behavior
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apply
extinction
of sharks because one shark has only one tail, to produce many shark's tail soups, they have to hunt a lot of sharks. Use synonyms
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, many people have fun from bad Linking Words
activies
like hunting as a sport, Correct your spelling
activities
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behavior
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behaviour
extinction
of many Use synonyms
species
in jungles. Use synonyms
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, Sa-man was already Linking Words
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extinct
behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
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apply
extinction
.
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stop
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stopping
extincted
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extinct
species
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sepecies
. Correct your spelling
species
Additionally
, sports like hunting should be banned. Linking Words
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stoping
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stopping
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expanditure
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expenditure
cities
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cities
plans to increase usage Use synonyms
areas
in the Use synonyms
citites
for people, and increase Correct your spelling
cities
animals
habitats in the woods.
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behaviors
can cause Change the spelling
behaviours
to
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apply
extinction
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in
some Change preposition
of
species
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such
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unusally
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unusually
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areas
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expenditure
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replaced
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hunting as a sport should be banned.Correct your spelling
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