Influence of human beings on the world 's ecosystem is leaving to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are primary causes of loss of biodiversity ? What solutions can you suggest ?
Nowadays,
human
are still expanding Fix the agreement mistake
humans
thier
cultures, and some human Correct your spelling
their
behaviors
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behaviours
such
as hunting, areas
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and areas
expanding
, are Replace the word
expansion
lead
to the Replace the word
leading
extinction
in
some Change preposition
of
species
of animals
. In the following paragraphs, the main reasons of
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for
this
problem and some practical solutions will be outlined in detail.
Human
have many Fix the agreement mistake
Humans
behaviors
that can cause Change the spelling
behaviours
to
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apply
the
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apply
extinction
in
some Change preposition
of
species
of animals
such
as eating behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
For example
, many people are likely to eat shark's tail soup which can cause to
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apply
extinction
of sharks because one shark has only one tail, to produce many shark's tail soups, they have to hunt a lot of sharks. Moreover
, many people have fun from bad activies
like hunting as a sport, Correct your spelling
activities
this
behavior
can lead to the Change the spelling
behaviour
extinction
of many species
in jungles. For example
, Sa-man was already extincted
from Thailand because of hunting Correct your spelling
extinct
behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
Additionally
, expanding area
from Fix the agreement mistake
areas
cities
into the woods are reducing many animals
habitats and leading to Change noun form
animals'
animal's
the
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apply
extinction
.
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these problems, begin with Change preposition
apply
stop
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stopping
extincted
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extinct
species
to provide a chance of reproducing processes to their sepecies
. Correct your spelling
species
Additionally
, sports like hunting should be banned. Moreover
, stoping
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stopping
areas
expanditure
from the Correct your spelling
expenditure
cities
to the woods by re-located cities
plans to increase usage areas
in the citites
for people, and increase Correct your spelling
cities
animals
habitats in the woods.
In conclusion, many human behaviors
can cause Change the spelling
behaviours
to
the Change preposition
apply
extinction
in
some Change preposition
of
species
such
as unusally
eating habits, Correct your spelling
unusually
areas
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area
expanditure
, and hunting as a sportCorrect your spelling
expenditure
,
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apply
should
be stopped, and Correct pronoun usage
which should
replace
with re-located Wrong verb form
replaced
cities
plans to increase usage areas
, and stop un-normal eating habits includings
hunting as a sport should be banned.Correct your spelling
including
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