Influence of human beings on the world 's ecosystem is leaving to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are primary causes of loss of biodiversity ? What solutions can you suggest ?

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are still expanding
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their
cultures, and some human
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such
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and areas
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expanding
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, are
lead
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to the
extinction
in
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some
species
of
animals
. In the following paragraphs, the main reasons
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this
problem and some practical solutions will be outlined in detail.
Human
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have many
behaviors
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that can cause
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the
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extinction
in
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some
species
of
animals
such
as eating
behavior
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.
For example
, many people are likely to eat shark's tail soup which can cause
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the
extinction
of sharks because one shark has only one tail, to produce many shark's tail soups, they have to hunt a lot of sharks.
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, many people have fun from bad
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activities
like hunting as a sport,
this
behavior
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behaviour
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can lead to the
extinction
of many
species
in jungles.
For example
, Sa-man was already
extincted
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extinct
from Thailand because of hunting
behavior
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.
Additionally
, expanding
area
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from
cities
into the woods are reducing many
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habitats and leading to
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extinction
. To tackle
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these problems, begin with
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eating nearly
extincted
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extinct
species
to provide a chance of reproducing processes to their
sepecies
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species
.
Additionally
, sports like hunting should be banned.
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,
stoping
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areas
expanditure
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expenditure
from the
cities
to the woods by re-located
cities
plans to increase usage
areas
in the
citites
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cities
for people, and increase
animals
habitats in the woods. In conclusion, many human
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can cause
to
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the
extinction
in
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some
species
such
as
unusally
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unusually
eating habits,
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area
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expanditure
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expenditure
, and hunting as a sport
,
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should
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be stopped, and
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with re-located
cities
plans to increase usage
areas
, and stop un-normal eating habits
includings
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including
hunting as a sport should be banned.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ecosystem
  • extinction
  • biodiversity
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • contamination
  • overexploitation
  • global warming
  • climate change
  • non-native
  • safeguard
  • eco-friendly
  • sustainable
  • legislation
  • rehabilitation
  • endangered species
  • conservation
  • environmental impact
  • sustainability
  • biodiversity loss
  • ecological balance
  • sanctuary
  • environmental degradation
  • policy implementation
  • wildlife protection
  • ecotourism
  • biodiversity conservation
  • ecological footprint
  • sustainable development
  • pollinator decline
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