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The aging population is good for business, the economy and society. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In
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 day and age, there has been a controversial argument about the elderly
population
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 whether it is good or not for many different aspects of
life
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. While there is a common belief that the ageing
population
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 helps to develop business, the economy, and society, I am convinced that the older
population
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 may have several disadvantages. When our society is growing day by day and
people
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's demands to improve their lives are increasing, the ageing
population
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 has an important role in giving us many benefits.
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 and foremost,
people
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 who have more experience will be better at making decisions because they are older and have a wider range of knowledge by years than the young. Not just that, adults can
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 hands-on experience with younger
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, and help them to avoid repeating their mistakes in the past.
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, the elderly
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 can be considered as family care-takers or babysitters,
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 they can help young parents to focus on their work and support them in the process of upbringing their children.
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, the older
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 plays a vital part in our
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.
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, I believe aside from the elderly
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 giving us benefits for
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, it
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 leaves some problems. One of the most common issues is lacking labour force which leads to the brink of an economic downturn.
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, in
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 new modern
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, young
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 in China and Japan do not want to get married and have babies.
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, these countries are facing a labour crisis because of the increasing expectancy and greying
population
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.
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,
people
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 over 60 years old are often no longer able to contribute to the economy, and they are the ones who are in need of social welfare
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 as pensions or healthcare.
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,
this
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 issue put huge pressure on the national budget. In conclusion, it is often believed that the ageing
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 is practically good for business, the economy and society, I am more convinced that
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 is an urgent problem because it affects
people
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’s lives in the future.
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