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Many people beleave that social networking sites such as facebook have a huge negative impact on indivisual and society. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #beleave #sites #facebook #impact #society
This
 is the fundamental right of every human being to have
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 transparent narrative about conflicted matters; civic factions, in
this
 regard, are bluntly exercising
this
 right when
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 about the effect associated with social
media
 networking
sites
such
 as
facebook
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.While a major social segment is rationally convinced that it is appropriate to consider that constant usage of
such
 social
media
 networking
sites
 are
prevailing
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 source of negativity
today's
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 life,
bothin
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both in
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individual
indivisual
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 and
sociatial
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societal
social
level
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. Without being biased,my narrative, hereby
affirm
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 that
this
 is sage to
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exhibit
 support in
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 of
such
 a worthy doctrine.
This
 essay will highlight some compelling
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 which
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 facilitating me to maintain my opinion without being
influance
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influenced
influence
 by any external factor. Core consideration which surely validates my narrative is related to compromised relationships. To explain it
further
, it's imperative to emphasize that we must consider the realistic side of the debate
instead
 of just choosing the conventional track of the truth. It's been observed that people tend to avoid
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conversation
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 with their family and friends
instead
 they
preffer
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prefer
 to enjoy virtual meetings and conversations over different social
sites
.
For instance
, a
facebook
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 user might have thousands of friends but not a single one in real life.
Thus
, I mention that
relationalships
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relationships
 are compromised and have deleterious effects on our
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lives
life
lifes
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. Another element
that is
 considerably consisting me to stay firm with my notion is
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related
 to the undue distraction. To put forward,
facebook
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 and
instagram
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 keep updating and
post
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 other exciting content almost every minute which
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result
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 inevitable distraction. As a matter of fact, youngsters are potential users of social
media
sites
 where
continious
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continuous
 virtual side tracks
and
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refrain them from their work and educational activities. conclusively, the debate which has been polarized and unending can't be
setteled
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settled
 easily by just arguing and focusing
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 side of the debate. needless to say, the
aformentioned
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aforementioned
 elements in favour of my opinion are subjectively valid,
unobjectional
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unobjectionable
 and reasonable to strengthen my opinion about the detrimental effects of social
media
 networking
sites
.
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