Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

In

this

contemporary world,

museums

are playing a vital role which

emphasize

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culture, history and heritage.

Moreover

, people are trying to get knowledge about ancient civilisations from these places. Wherever currently, most countries have charged entrance

fee

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through

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visitors as well as local citizens.

Although

some argued

this

process

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for

museum's

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development and others demonstrated that it was

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unnecessary method.

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essay will focus on what are the merits and demerits of charging

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fee

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? Eventually, I will elaborate on my opinion too.

To begin

with, nowadays

museums

are not managed by local governments due to, economic issues in their nations. Wherever it should want to earn

money

to maintenance and are charged from the public for

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all the

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.

Further

,

museum

's management faculty truly hesitate to give salaries to their workers because of the low amount of

money

and getting

money

from touris9 and locals have a solution to tackle

this

issue.

For example

, in Srilanka , the space

museum

has conducted

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exhibition for people to collect

money

to manage

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development.

As a result

, it proves it has a benefit to

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museum

as well as

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workers because they are able to fix their mo ey issues and assists to present quality presentations for the public to get fame and popularity.

On the other hand

, wherever others have a bad Impres

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charging cash in the

museums

.

Furthermore

, citizens who

are belong

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to

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low-class families, cannot afford to pay

money

and they missed

such

great opportunities ingeir life.

For instance

, in 2000, an Indian survey shows, that year most of the international tourists about 80%, flocked to the local

museums

rather than their native citizens.

Consequently

, it

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that the poor commodity

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it's a

money

waste activity and they try to utilize it

in

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other daily purposes. In conclusion, from my perspective , I believe in charging from people has

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positive causes rather than negative outputs. Particularly, it attains to

by

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handle

museum

's routines , are able to improve facilities. If we do not give

money

for admission fees, absolutely difficult to fulfil the daily maintenance. Unless we are

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concern about

this

matter, we will never have

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opportunity to preserve the renewable things for our future generations.