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A test for cycling should be mandatory. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, There
have
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 a new trend
of
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 life that people are motivated to exercise more than
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 past. Some people said that a
test
 for cycling should be mandatory. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
 policy and I will explain
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 reason in the following paragraph.
Firstly
, A
test
 for cycling will make all cyclists an opportunity to learn traffic rules. Due to in the street, There are not
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only bicycles but
also
 have various types of cars.
Accordingly
, Using the same street should be learning traffic rules. Cycling will know rights and duties when doing something wrong from educated information about rules and testing them.
Secondly
, Before a
test
 for cycling. It enforced that parents must teach children before getting
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 to ride freely. It is an
appropiate
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appropriate
 thing that children should practice before freely riding.
Thirdly
, A
test
 for cycling will reduce an accident in the future because all cyclists must confirm their ability from tests.
However
, I think the cycling
test
 should design suitable for each of people divided by age. In conclusion, I could not agree more that a
test
 for cycling is necessary.
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