Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays crimes are
increased
all over the world. few are trust Wrong verb form
increasing
fixed
Correct pronoun usage
that fixed
punishments
will be useful for reducing crime
whereas others think, personal
Correct word choice
that personal
crime
and encourage
for implement it must Replace the word
encouragement
also
be taken to
consideration. In my view, I believe fixed Change preposition
into
punishments
will caused
less Change the verb form
cause
be caused
crime
.
On one hand, when the punishments
are fixed, the criminals
will be afraid to commit the wrongdoers. This
strategy will mitigate crime
in the
society. for an instance, Correct article usage
apply
for
theft can be given a 100,000 rupees penalty as a Change preposition
apply
punishment
. Furthermore
, for
rape Change preposition
apply
crime
should be punishable by giving the wrongdoers of death
penalty or Add an article
the death
lifetime
sentence of imprisonment. Correct article usage
a lifetime
Therefore
depending on the circumstances, the punishments
should be given for the crime
.
On the other hand
, the individual who encourages a crime
also
should be punished. Criminals
could not arrange and formulate crime
by
their own. they need supporters who motivated them by providing brainwashed advice, Change preposition
on
issued
types of equipment, and guiding them in a way to commit the Wrong verb form
issuing
crime
easily. To illustrate, the criminal who wanted to burglar a house, will collect personal information and observe the house owners' attitudes and learn their behaviours from time to time, for this
data collection, the criminal's friends also
support and analyze or share the information among them. As a result
the criminals
and their supporters regularly formulate crime
as their routine and this
methodology should be avoided.
To sum up, In my perspective, I believe, fixed punishment
should be given to the criminals
instead
other individual motivators' punishment
. Fixed punishment
should display in the constitution where each and every individual are aware of that and make them knowledge offences ad future consequences.Submitted by sutharshinirenganathan on
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