Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays crimes are

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all over the world. few are trust

fixed

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that fixed

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punishments

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will be useful for reducing

crime

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whereas others think,

personal

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crime

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and

encourage

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for implement it must

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be taken

to

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consideration. In my view, I believe fixed

punishments

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will

caused

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less

crime

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. On one hand, when the

punishments

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are fixed, the

criminals

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will be afraid to commit the wrongdoers.

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strategy will mitigate

crime

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in

the

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society. for an instance,

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theft can be given a 100,000 rupees penalty as a

punishment

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.

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,

for

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rape

crime

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should be punishable by giving the wrongdoers of

death

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penalty or

lifetime

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sentence of imprisonment.

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depending on the circumstances, the

punishments

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should be given for the

crime

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.

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, the individual who encourages a

crime

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should be punished.

Criminals

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could not arrange and formulate

crime

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by

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their own. they need supporters who motivated them by providing brainwashed advice,

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types of equipment, and guiding them in a way to commit the

crime

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easily. To illustrate, the criminal who wanted to burglar a house, will collect personal information and observe the house owners' attitudes and learn their behaviours from time to time, for

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data collection, the criminal's friends

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support and analyze or share the information among them.

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the

criminals

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and their supporters regularly formulate

crime

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as their routine and

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methodology should be avoided. To sum up, In my perspective, I believe, fixed

punishment

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should be given to the

criminals

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instead

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other individual motivators'

punishment

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. Fixed

punishment

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should display in the constitution where each and every individual are aware of that and make them knowledge offences ad future consequences.