Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is generally discussed that males and
females
possess various types of skills so Use synonyms
both
of these genders are specialised in certain professions. I partially agree with Use synonyms
this
statement for some reasons.
To start with, as Linking Words
men
are much stronger and fitter by nature compared to Use synonyms
women
, there are some Use synonyms
jobs
that Use synonyms
females
cannot fulfil Use synonyms
such
as miners, builders, porters, truckers and so on. I mean that Linking Words
such
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work
requires a lot of energy, strength Use synonyms
as well as
endurance. Linking Words
That is
why, Linking Words
women
are incapable of doing heavy Use synonyms
work
. Use synonyms
However
, I can freely say that Linking Words
females
are much more suitable for particular Use synonyms
jobs
that Use synonyms
men
are unable to manage like nannies, cleaners, nurses, tailors, etc. Namely, they have been involved in Use synonyms
such
kinds of professions for centuries. In our country Uzbekistan, Linking Words
for example
, only a woman can Linking Words
work
as a nanny in kindergartens since they have more roles in children's behavior rather than Use synonyms
men
.
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Nevertheless
, in our modern society, there are several Linking Words
jobs
that Use synonyms
both
males and Use synonyms
females
might be able to accomplish. Use synonyms
For instance
, in most countries, Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
can Use synonyms
work
as doctors, teachers and other universal professions as Use synonyms
both
of them have the same qualities in these Use synonyms
jobs
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such
as being creative, skilful, knowledgeable and experienced. Linking Words
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, owing to gender equality, which is being promoted throughout the world, Linking Words
women
can Use synonyms
work
as officials in the government. To take an example, a middle-aged lady is the president of Croatia and runs the country well.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is not a good idea to separate Use synonyms
jobs
for males or Use synonyms
females
as Use synonyms
both
can do their best in any occupation.Use synonyms
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