Some people say that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The
games
which jeopardise Use synonyms
ones
Change to a genitive case
one's
life
should be abrogated. Use synonyms
However
, risky plays fashion Linking Words
people
to face Use synonyms
any
difficulties. From my perspective, jeopardising any sports should be aborted.
It seems undeniable that human has to play to refresh Correct quantifier usage
apply
his
mind. Man Correct pronoun usage
their
are
very keen to grab any Change the verb form
is
games
which Use synonyms
is
very enjoyable to them. Most of the Change the verb form
are
persons
are very Replace the word
people
attractive
to take any entertainment Replace the word
attracted
where
playing any events is one of them. As a consequence, they like to play various kinds of Replace the word
were
games
. The play which is very risky must be avoided. Dangerous play trap human Use synonyms
into
many difficulties. Some Change preposition
in
people
lose Use synonyms
their
any parts of Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
bodies. Some Change the word
their
has
to sacrifice their lives to take part Change the verb form
have
any
risky play. Change preposition
in any
Thus
, to prevent Linking Words
this
catastrophic Linking Words
Use synonyms
games
should be banned. Fix the agreement mistake
game
Consequently
, Linking Words
person
who Add an article
the person
a person
appear
in Change the verb form
appears
the
risky game can strengthen their bodies. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, Linking Words
life
is worth it for humans and it should not be loosened playing any risky Use synonyms
games
. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, Linking Words
people
can take the challenge to participate in any jeopardising play.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, every human has a family. They have to support their families. By playing risky Linking Words
games
they fall their society in danger. Use synonyms
As a result
, their family suffers their whole Linking Words
life
. The family who Use synonyms
are
dependent on the individual persons cannot uplift their positions in the society. They have to earn a lot of money. They have to adopt adequate wealth. In Change the verb form
is
this
way, risky Linking Words
games
must be avoided as Use synonyms
it
can create enough harm for anyone. Correct pronoun usage
they
Nevertheless
, the person who plays a dangerous game can apprehend the reality of Linking Words
life
. They can figure out any risky situation Use synonyms
in
any moment. Change preposition
at
For example
, most of the family may get helpless if their main member Linking Words
appear
in Change the verb form
appears
the
dangerous play. Correct article usage
a
On the contrary
, Linking Words
this
risky game enriches them into Linking Words
an
stage.
In conclusion, catastrophic play should be restricted. Change the article
a
Conversely
, Linking Words
people
need to take challenges to take part in any risky event.Use synonyms
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