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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary era, the invention of the
software
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 of any national
language
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second
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, with the adoption of
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importance
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 of learning a
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 is not viable where anyone
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 to speak or have to reply immediately in a foreign
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internet
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 service is unavailable. The forthcoming paragraphs elucidate
about
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the reasons and relevant examples with supporting my viewpoints. To commence with,
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any body
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 talking to some person have to talk to
foreigner
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a foreigner
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 and have to
looking
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 for
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a job
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 in
foreign
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a foreign
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 nation and have to give interview in another
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,
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 immediately.
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, learning a foreign
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 is extremely crucial for everyone who is visiting another nation.
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, Indian nation
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students
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 have to learn English or prepare for IELTS
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 going to study abroad or
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in English-speaking
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 nations,
no
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any
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are
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 allowed in
exam
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, there are many under-developed and developing nations, like
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 south Asian and African countries are scrambling with trivial
internet
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 facility and
such
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internet
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, without learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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, it would be very difficult to communicate with native citizens.
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,
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internet
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, without accessing the
internet
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a foreigner
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foreigner
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foreigners
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, only learning a
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in
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it. To conclude,
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with
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the invention of
software
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language
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 has
open
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 many doors for many people to understand any
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 even,
they
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though they
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 have not
learned
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, in my
opinion
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translation
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the internet
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 is unavailable and while practically, we communicate with foreigners.
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  • Career Advancement
  • Multilingual
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