Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

As the technology has advanced, the

wrold

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world

became smaller and smaller, and it has become a village due to the most high-tech transportation and communication. Because of that, countries have become similar to each other and people are able to purchase anything with

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ease from any place around the globe.

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, I personally think

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trend has

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amount of advantages and explain why in

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essay.

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,

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matter opened tremendous

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opportunities

for everyone as

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employment as well as economics. In the past, it is so difficult to buy everything that we need due to the fact that transportation systems are not advanced enough to travel from one place to another in a matter of days.

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, in around

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century, merchants used to carry salt with camels around the desserts for months and sold them

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high costs since expenditures of those are not cheap. But, in

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world, we can

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easily

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buy salt

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the lowest price

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anywhere as there are already cars ,trains and

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planes

places

which can carry them in a matter of days. Nowadays, every city in every country has schools, hospitals, banks, parks,

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universities and etc

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are the most fundamental needs of

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human beings.

Moreover

, the most

prestigous

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prestigious

companies

such

as Apple, Toyota and Samsung have established their branches

throught

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throughout

through

through to

the world and manufactured their products. So, people can easily buy the same products of those

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without even caring

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extra cost of

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.

Furthermore

, people have more chances to work in

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different

kinds of companies as there are an increasing number of companies founded around the world.

However

, countries can have conflicts

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each

others

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as they don't tend to like

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others copy their technique

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because

of the nature of

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. To conclude, I pen down

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that

this

phenomenon has many pros that can outweigh the cons and is a good thing that

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to humanity.