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Some people believe that successful sports teams are always those with the strongest or fittest players. Others think that success depends more on the team’s mental strength. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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players
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 require various skills in order to excel. While some people believe that in order for
sports
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 teams to be successful they need the strongest
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, others argue that success depends more on their mental
strength
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 rather than their physical one.
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 I believe that they're both equally important. Understandably, some of us believe that
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 teams' excellence relies heavily on the physical
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 of their
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; because most
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 require
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high physical stamina and powerful muscle
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, I see why physical
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 is a requirement. Since the duration of a football match is around 90 minutes, in which
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 are required to run and score goals almost the whole period with only a short half-time break, only the teams with the fittest
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 can keep going with their optimum
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 throughout the whole match.
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, when others think that mental
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 is important for success, they are not entirely wrong, either.
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 many strong
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 get tired at some point during the match, their motivation and ability to stay focused will help them overcome their physical fatigue. Mo Salah,
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, is considered one of the best
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 in the world, but lately, due to the lack of clarity and motivation, his performance is not at its best. So it is safe to say that both physical and mental strengths are equally of utmost importance for
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players
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. In conclusion, even though some believe that the success of a
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 team depends mostly on its
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' physical
strength
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, and others believe that their mental one is more important, I personally believe that they are of equal importance.
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