Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it. What do you think is the reason?

One

of the most conspicuous

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in the 21st century is the difficulty of keeping a life

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.It is undoubtedly the case that

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to balance their family which is

also

affecting the society adversely. In

this

essay, I am going to examine the possible reasons for

this

trend and suggest some of the proactive measures that

parents

could implement to reduce

this

problem. The

first

step is to understand why

this

happening broadly, speaking there are two main reasons for

this

. The

first

and foremost is to

cut throat

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competitive environment due to

this

cause it is difficult to survive in the surrounding.

Parents

want to get

succed

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succeed

in their life and they want to earn more

,

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and

fulfill

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the needs and

deed

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of their children.

Parents

are doing

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part

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time

jobs which

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a

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work load

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.A good example is that a person who is

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or accountant

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no

time

to

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with their family and the bonds between the family member are

break

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down.

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from

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that

one

of the causes

be

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multitasking.

parents

are trying to do their

work

fast which creates many problems for them.They make promises

with

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their family member but

parents

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their parents

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unable

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to complete

it

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. Which cause

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harm

for

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the trust of other

towards

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themselves,

For example

, In France had 35 working hours per week. There is almost certainly no

one

solution to

this

problem given the complexity of its causes .

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one

option has to be

make

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general

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public aware of

time

management.

Parents

should

creates

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the boundaries between

work

and the family.

Parents

should manage the

procrasting

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procrastinate

procreating

and learn to say no to others. A good example is that at the weekend the

parents

move outside with their current and spent more

time

with them and enjoy the moments. In conclusion , there

are

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variety

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of different

factor

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that

have

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led to

make

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this

problem Worsley. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution

of

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this

.

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could probably

solved

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by

parents

. They should create a schedule

of

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for

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their

work

and take a proper

time

to

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their family and enjoy

with

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themselves with

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them.