With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem?

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other species and it had

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Topic Vocabulary:

deforestation
urban development
illegal hunting
endangered species
extinction
ecological balance
ecosystems
pollination
seed dispersal
population control
biodiversity
resilience
intrinsic value
economic benefits
tourism
agriculture
legislation
wildlife protection laws
illegal hunting
wildlife reserves
marine protected areas
public awareness
conservation
community involvement
sustainable practices
scientific research
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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

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