Topic: Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, a majority belong to
information
technology Correct article usage
the information
feild
. Information technology sectors have attractive offices Correct your spelling
field
However
, they start Correct your spelling
working
woking
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working
by
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at
home
during pandemic
of Covid-19. Add an article
the pandemic
This
is the only sector where workers are able to join their work
from anywhere while doing travel or from staying anywhere. In this
essay
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,essay
i
will discuss Change the capitalization
I
pros
and cons of Correct article usage
the pros
work
outside Wrong verb form
working
their
workplace.
Information technology Change the word
the
consist
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consists
programming
, working on Change preposition
of programming
softwares
etc it only Correct your spelling
software
happen
by using computers or laptopChange the verb form
happens
Add the comma(s)
, in contrast,
in contrast
other segments such
as food
industry, Correct article usage
the food
pharmaceuticals
always required physical verification. There are Correct word choice
and pharmaceuticals
alot
of positives of doing Correct your spelling
a lot
job
from anywhere Add an article
the job
a job
for instance
a
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apply
women
who have Fix the agreement mistake
woman
a
infant and she is unable to join Change the article
an
office
to leave her child. In Correct article usage
the office
this
case
if she Add a comma
,case
have
Change the verb form
has
a
option to continue her Change the article
an
work
by
Change preposition
at
home
it is convenient to take care her
child while attending Change preposition
of her
office
.
Other benefits, people
able to do their
some other Replace the word
there
work
while doing job
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the job
a job
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, for example,
for example
they are able to cook fresh food for theirselves
and have lunch or dinner with their love ones. During travelling or going Correct your spelling
themselves
to
anywhere Change preposition
apply
people
who have laptop
so they can easily take their Add an article
a laptop
office
with theirselves
without taking off from Correct your spelling
themselves
work
.
On the other hand
of conversation, some people
face real issues by having sedentary
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a sedentary
job
because in this
feild
Correct your spelling
field
people
working more than 9 to 10 hours on computers or on laptop
. Add an article
the laptop
a laptop
In other
words
a great number of companies started giving Add a comma
,words
work
from home
to their 95 % of employess
during Correct your spelling
employees
employers
pandemic
of COVID-19 and they are continuing their jobs till now because companies saved a large number of maintenance Add an article
the pandemic
cost
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costs
of
employees, Change preposition
for
they
started a hybrid culture. In Correct word choice
and they
this
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scenario
scenerio
fitness will Add a comma
,scenerio
compromised
.
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons Change the verb form
compromise
be compromised
of
working in Change preposition
to
this
feild
. A majority enjoy their Correct your spelling
field
work
by continue
by Change the verb form
continuing
home
or from anywhere by givig
time to their family. Mothers have Correct your spelling
giving
golden
opportunity to attend Correct article usage
a golden
office
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the office
by
Change preposition
at
home
. Some cons about physical
activity which is compromised. All advantages outweigh the Add an article
a physical
the physical
disadvanges
because a comfortable Correct your spelling
disadvantages
job
is more convenient at
the end for every employee.Change preposition
in
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