It is common nowadays for each member of family to have their own peace of modern technology. Some people think that this will lead to a break down in the family relationships and communication to what extent do you agree or disagree.
With the modernization in the world and advancement in the technologies, everyone owns a technological device to communicate with their relatives and
friends
who stays far away. Using excessive technology
develops a conflict between the near and dear ones. This
essay will cover both the views and a conclusion thereafter
.
Firstly
, to begin
with, technology
is invented to make human life easier to communicate with their family members
and friends
. In addition
, technology
plays a vital role in providing leisure time from a busy schedule. If any of the members
are staying in a different city or country, therefore
, it will be easy to communicate with them through the internet. For example
, my brother stays in England, so my mother uses the internet to talk to him and check on him. As a result
, you are able to talk to the person who stays away from you and communicate with them, this
builds the relationship stronger.
On the other hand
, people
believe that using technology
for their own peace can sometimes lead to a gap between the family members
, and develop conflicts between them. In other words
, people
tend to use technology
a lot in their day-to-day life for various activities such
as playing video games and browsing, and social media apps, due to which, relationships with family members
and friends
get ruined. In addition
, youngsters these days can only be seen at home rather than playing outside with friends
, this
leads to an unhealthy lifestyle. For instance
, there are a few children in my family who can always be seen with a gadget in their hands. As a result
, they won't talk to others which are eventually affecting the relationship.
In conclusion, in my opinion, both views have some advantages and disadvantages, with the excessive use of technology
people
are ruining their relationship with their family or friends
. People
have to make sure they utilize their leisure time by playing physical games or physical chatting with their relatives.Submitted by vaibhavvarshney67 on
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