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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion.

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In the fast-paced world that we presently reside in, education is one of the fundamental tools in each individual's life
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 teachers play a vital role. Some people believe
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 learners will be more effective in academics if a single instructor trains them for many years.
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, others opine that new tutors should be introduced every period. In my opinion, new teachers will create more benefits in
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 life. On the one hand, every
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 will have different strategies and ways of teaching.
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, long-term instructors will know the pros and cons of each
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 in the class and provide exceptional attention to those who need it. Retaining the same
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 for several years improves a
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's career as they are more comfortable and open to the
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 to share their problems in subjects, which will be greatly useful for getting good grades in the exams.
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, Individuals will probably be encircled in a comfort zone and can become introverts as they always depend on a single tutor.
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, Having a different trainer in every grade would help a
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.
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, students would find difficulties adapting to a new
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's teaching style immediately and for the educator to understand each individual.
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, the
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 completes their assignments on time and
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 discipline on the school premises as they are not well known by their class
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.
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, the pupil gets an opportunity to learn new stuff through different methods and try to mingle with other students.
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, the same
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 every year creates a good relationship between the students and trainers.
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, it is always best to change the instructors in every class as it enhances the learners with many new ideas and ways of learning.

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coherence
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coherence
Vary your sentence structures to enhance the overall flow of your essay.
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You have clearly expressed your opinion throughout the essay.
coherence
Your introduction sets up the discussion well, providing a clear overview of the topic.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • benefit
  • persistent relationship
  • academic performance
  • support
  • guidance
  • familiarity
  • strengths and weaknesses
  • personalized feedback
  • expose
  • diverse
  • perspective
  • subject matter expertise
  • enriching
  • resourcefulness
  • innovative practices
  • curriculum
  • monotony
  • stagnation
  • mitigate
  • favoritism
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