Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

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should say advertising is
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way to knowledge about everything in our
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explain
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way to know about every one thing and
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the internet and television threw how is going on producing
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in our country.
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stems from the fact is that some
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say that advertising is
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life
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to show
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our television and internet.
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will buy
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to see advertising
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tv but
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people
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result. The key point of
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government in 2019 suggested that 44%
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advertising
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the internet.
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, advertising
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television .  To conclude,
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advertising
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youtube and official accounts threw .
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