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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subjects. To what extent do you apree or disapree?

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Both
men
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 and
women
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 should be accepted in different education
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 with the same priority on various topics. I,
however
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, totally agree with the given statement on the basis of some primary reasons which will be discussed in detail.
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 with, diversity of vision is the
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 contributing factor involved in
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 matter. Obviously, females and males have two various points of view on the same subjects which in turn lead to more creative ideas and on top of that, the basic
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 of both
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 and
women
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 to pursue their interests according to their ability is another prime cause which should be pointed out. If individuals have the
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 to study in their favourite major just for their
gender
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 (meaningless), they will be demotivated in their rest lifetime for the rest of their lives). Having said that, different visions and the basic
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 are not the only items associated with
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 topic, another compelling factor which should be noticed is the various natural aptitudes of different genders. It is evident that
women
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 can outperform their male counterparts in some specific subjects. Take science as an example, the imagination power of females would allow them to discover unknown things better than
men
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. Not only do they do their theoretical tasks better in
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 field, but
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, they can possess different results in their practical subjects too due largely to their physical differences. To wrap all it up, I believe that
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 there are many differences between
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women
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 on account of their
gender
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. We should place a premium (on) both of them and it's their
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right
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 to be accepted in their favourite universities for their skills regardless of their
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 and it should be a big chance (for) them to follow their goals according to hard work and their
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 must not act as a deterrent along their way.
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