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a magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -describe what this book was about -explain how this book influenced you -say whether this book would be likely to influence to the others

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Dear Editor, I want to write a letter to you because I saw your announcement about 'The
book
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 that influenced me most'. I had read a
book
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 about aviation. Its name is 'MAYDAY MAYDAY MAYDAY'. And writer name is Menderes Çakıcı. He is working as a commercial pilot at Turkish Airlines. And
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, that influenced me the most. I can describe what
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 was about. It was about emergency landings of planes.
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, some CRM( Crew Resources Management) subjects are included in the
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. I can highly recommend
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 because it would be effective for learners or new pilots. It was very influenced by me. Especially,
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 I was reading, I was listening to voices in the cockpit. Because the writer wrote the conversations between the two captains as if we were listening aloud. In my opinion, that method was very impressive. Thanks to
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, I felt like, I was in the
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.
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, I guess, the
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 would influence a lot of people who are interested in aviation. So,
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 why, I wanted to share my opinion with you. I would be very pleased if you included
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.in the article. Thank you from now on. I am waiting for your answer. I wish you good work days. Have a nice day. Sincerely, Marry White Sincerely

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Coherence and Cohesion
The letter has a clear structure, but try to vary your sentence structures for a more advanced coherence.
Task Achievement
You've effectively addressed all parts of the task. For future writings, adding more detailed examples could enhance the task achievement.
Greeting and Closing
The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate, showcasing a good understanding of the letter format.
Task Achievement
You stayed on topic throughout the letter, clearly addressing the magazine's request.
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