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Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. To what extent do you agree?

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Language
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 is an integral part of human communication and it is one
such
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 skill which can be learned through practice. Some
people
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 believe that, unless you have spent time living or working in a foreign country, you can never become fluent in a
language
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.
However
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, there are various other ways to become proficient in a foreign
language
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.
This
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 essay will cover those.
To begin
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 with,
people
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 who live in foreign countries face difficulties in speaking their local
language
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 in the beginning, while
this
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 can be improved by talking to the local residents in their local
language
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.
Furthermore
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, a human mind grabs the
language
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 quickly if he is surrounded by the
people
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 who always speak the common
language
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.
For example
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,
people
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 travelling from India to other countries where English is the native
language
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, find difficulties in the beginning, but once they talk to local residents they adapt their
language
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.
As a result
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, living or working in a foreign country can make the process of learning faster and simpler.
On the other hand
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, living in a foreign land is not the only way to become fluent in a
language
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.
People
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 can look for various other ways too,
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 as reading books, watching movies and regional shows, and listing to songs.
In addition
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,
people
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 might find it difficult to understand in the starting, but slowly and gradually
people
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 start to enjoy it.
For instance
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, my friend who is not a French person can speak French fluently, he learned by watching french shows and listening to French songs.
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, to develop fluency in any
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 one has
to begin
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 somewhere. In conclusion,
although
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 to some extent I believe that
people
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 working or studying in a foreign country tends to learn their local
language
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 faster as they are surrounded by the local residents, it can
also
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 be taken into consideration that reading, and watching shows online can help in developing fluency in a particular
language
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.
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