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You recently took a long vacation. In your absence a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking to your friend. ın your letter: Explain what the favor was Desribe how this favor helped you Offer compansation Write at least 150 word

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Dear Ramya, How are you, hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing
this
 letter to express my sincere gratitude as you helped my
parents
 every day with their daily needs and shopping during my absence. My
parents
also
 were very happy with the kind of help and support you provided in the
last
 week. As you know, my father cannot drive the car and you took my
parents
 in your car and offered a ride daily which was very kind and helpful to me.
In addition
, the way you look after my mother's shopping needs every day whenever she needs and
this
 was super supportive to my family. Despite your busy work schedule, you helped my family all the way. I know, saying just thank you is easy and not at all satisfying to me and my family.
Hence
, I would like to invite you to my home to have a great lunch
next
 week. Please feel free to let us know your availability and do not hesitate to call me on my mobile number. I cannot wait anymore to see you and have a great lunch with my
parents
. Best Regards, Lakshmi.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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