Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, I see a lot of
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applications. There are various
translation
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applications in
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.
However
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, learning a
language
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could still be beneficial more than using the application. In my opinion, I totally agree with
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sentence and I will explain to support my reason in the following paragraph.
Firstly
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, Learning a
language
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will benefit you when travelling overseas more than using
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software
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because you can speak and listen clearly more than using
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software
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.
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, When I went to Hongkong. Some local people prefer to bargain the price of products or souvenirs if tourists can request discount prices in the Chinese
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. Some merchants feel annoyed when he/she wait for tourists to use
translation
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programs in order to sell products to other people.
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, If students wish to study abroad. The local
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is necessary to learn and practice
otherwise
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I ensure that students will face a lot of problems if they can not take naturally
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have conversations
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with peers and professors.
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, It will be very hard when doing a test , researching a book in the library or shopping for food materials in the local market.
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, The
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applications translate word-by-word.
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, It merely gives the meaning of words but not truly sentences that you want to express.
Translation
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software
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cannot translate slang and idiom.
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, a Crocodile tear does not mean a drop when a crocodile cried but its means insincerely people. In conclusion, I totally agree with learning a
language
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will make more benefits than using a
translation
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application.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural Appreciation
  • Cognitive Flexibility
  • Idiomatic Expressions
  • Career Advancement
  • Multilingual
  • Proficiency
  • Empathy
  • Cultural Barriers
  • Native Speaker Fluency
  • Colloquialisms
  • Language Acquisition
  • Immersive Experience
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