Global environmental issues are the responsibility of rich nations not of poorer nations. Do you agree with this opinion?

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The serious
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that is
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happening in the world right now is the environmental
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. There is no
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in the world without environmental pollution. some people think that the
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for environmental problems belongs to rich
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, but
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my opinion, we all live on the same planet, so I think we should solve
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problem
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altogether. So I disagree with
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statement. Rich
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are responsible for
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problem
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. There are many factories, factories have an impact on causing a huge amount of environmental pollution, as more things are developed to
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and as much as it has developed the amount of trash will increase. So rich
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should take the lead in protecting the environment with that
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technology. The
responsibility
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of the poor
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is. Deforestation is serious in
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poor
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. They live by nature for want of money. They cut down the trees more and more. They do not have much money like the rich
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, so they need to
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nature to live,
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the forest is slowly being destroyed
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them. Of course, rich
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have more power to help solve
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, but
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not mean to say they do not have
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this
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problem
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. They should
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it sparingly, not waste it because of greed. In conclusion, environmental problems mainly arise from human life,
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, every
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is at the world to solve
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by working together, we should help each other. The
responsibility
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is not only for rich
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all
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and everyone
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responsibility
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. They should
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it sparingly, not waste it because of greed.
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