Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while visiting one of their stores. In your letter include: • what the problem was • why this problem has upset you • what you want to happen as a result of your letter

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week, while shopping at your west end location, I noticed that your centre was playing an extremely graphic movie to demonstrate the visual capabilities of a new television model. The day I was in your store, my children were exposed to the violence you allowed to be screened. I am aware children are not your company’s target market, but you have to acknowledge that they do visit your stores regularly with their parents. I trust you can empathize with my situation.

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, I am expecting you to take immediate action by changing the material you use in your displays. I am

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expecting you to reprimand the members of your team responsible for allowing

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an oversight to happen. Your timely attention to

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matter is needed. Ron Frederickson

fatemezand1990Mon May 30 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

130 words

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Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while visiting one of their stores. In your letter include: • what the problem was • why this problem has upset you • what you want to happen as a result of your letter

The Greeting

Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of the problem and what measure could be taken to solve it?

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These days many children spend a great deal of time sitting in from of a television. Some people believe that parents should strictly limit the time that children spend watching TV as it is harmful to their development. To what extend do you agree or disagree?