You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him. In your letter explain the occasion to him , invite him to the party, tell him why you wnat him to perform.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to invite you to the retirement ceremony of my father who is going to retire from his service by the end of next week on the 31st of July. As mentioned above that day is very special for my parents and I really want to make it memorable for them yet I am a bit worried about the management of your schedule. So, I thought to arrange a special party at my residence located in Ambala City and want you to perform live during the event. My father is among
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. I wish to surprise him with the performance of his favourite singer during the occasion.
Therefore
, I am inviting you to join the celebrations and at the same time make it more enjoyable with your melodious voice. Feel free to call me on 7421252432 for any
further
details I am hoping to get your positive response on
this
matter. Thanking You. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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task response
Ensure to provide the necessary details such as the date and time of the event in the invitation.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a smooth transition between ideas and paragraphs for better coherence.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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