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Some people believe that nuclear weapon is the solution to world peace. Others, however, think that they only cause conflicts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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While it is widely claimed that nuclear
weapons
 could create peace in the world, some argue that
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 can result in relations crises. Both points of view and the reason why I believe that
this
artillery
 not be used as a diplomacy instrument to maintain global peace will be elaborated
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To begin
 with, it might seem sensible for some to believe that nuclear
weapons
 represent the peacebuilding strategy among the global community, seeing that these
weapons
 play an essential role in international diplomacy in order to prevent largescale conflicts that can bring to contribute war. North Korea,
for example
, has demonstrated a surprising military ability to defend itself against powerful nations,
such
 as the United State and Japan, by conducting nuclear test sites. From
this
 perspective, it is understandable why some would prefer the deployment of nuclear arms.
On the other hand
, opponents of
this
 idea might propose that nuclear
artillery
 can solely contribute to conflicts. To put
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 other words, nuclear superpowers can deploy the existence of a military nuclear program to threaten their neighbours. Russia as one of the world’s nuclear power countries,
for instance
, has escalated its conflict crisis with Ukraine by using tactical nuclear
weapons
. Personally, I would argue in favour of nuclear
artillery
 threatening global peace, as these
weapons
 can be used in inappropriate actions
such
 as military intrusion. To illustrate, most of the powerful states in the past forced smaller nations to their benefit.
Consequently
, assuming that a superpower appears to create the fear that nuclear war could happen at any time, small countries might be lost their policy independence, leading to more harm than many would imagine. In conclusion,
although
 it is undeniable that nuclear
artillery
 can be used as a powerful diplomatic strategy, I am of the opinion that these
weapons
 only cause conflicts in order to contribute to the benefit of their powerful states.
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