Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
People
have different opitinos
about what to do with wastes that are generated from households and some Correct your spelling
opinions
options
pople
highlight that recycling from those Correct your spelling
people
are
not enough since most Correct subject-verb agreement
is
people
don't have the mortality to throw out systemically and far
from the recycling. So, I strongly agree with the fact that Add a missing verb
are far
governments
need to take actions
in order to acquire the awareness of recycling for the public.
Fix the agreement mistake
action
To begin
with, people
tend to do easily in whatever the
cases as Correct article usage
apply
lazy
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laziness
is
one of the chief characteristics of human nature. Change the verb form
are
Therefore
, if no laws were made in the first
place, mountains of trash can be seen in front of everyone's houses. That's why governments
need to make new laws to ensure that everybody have
the knowledge of three Rs which stands for Change the verb form
has
reduce
,reuse and recycle. By setting fixed time for Change the verb form
reducing
arrival
of Add an article
the arrival
garbage
truck in every Add an article
a garbage
the garbage
districts
and giving duties to staff to mark whose house is thrown Change to a singular noun
district
rubish
or not and if one house is missed more than three times of that, they should be fined.
Turning to the Correct your spelling
rubbish
recycle
process, Change the form of the verb
recycling
governments
should hold campaigns about environmental pollution which will likey
to affect the health of living Correct your spelling
likely
things
in the near feature
and the Correct your spelling
future
incresaing
population of wastes is the main culprit of Correct your spelling
increasing
this
phenomenon. So, people
need to mitigate this
problem as much as they by
many ways Change preposition
in
such
as using again the things
that can be used and if that can't be used, those things
should be delivered to recycling centers
. Change the spelling
centres
Then
, governments
need to do more things
like classifying trash bins into non-recycle
, Correct your spelling
non-recycled
recyle
and organic wastes and if one is not obeyed, he would be punished with financial Correct your spelling
recycle
recycled
penality
.
To conclude, I pen down saying that Correct your spelling
penalty
people
alone can't solve this
phenomenon and new a few laws need to be enacted to ensure recycling progress will achieve the distination
goalsCorrect your spelling
destination
distinction
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