Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is more useful for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that
television
is the preferable medium which can be used for education, while other
say it can be more useful for entertainment. Correct pronoun usage
others
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,
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television
would bring the latest information
to your Correct your spelling
doorstep
door step
, I believe it will be more useful for getting teaching in remote areas.
On the one hand, Correct your spelling
doorstep
television
brings the opportunity of viewing the latest movies within a span of time
to your doors. When people
get frustrated after tireless hours of working at office
gives them the pleasure of viewing their Add an article
the office
favorite
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favourite
in
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on
television
for a
mindful stress relief. Remove the article
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Additionally
, it provides room for family
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a family
reunion
between members while enjoying their preferable web series. Fix the agreement mistake
reunions
For example
, In the United States of America, families prefer to watch their all-time
favorite
episodes of serials together at weekends which provides themChange the spelling
favourite
a
better place for reunification. Add the preposition
with a
However
, I believe the time
spend in front of television
for long hours will bring addiction and which should be avoided in life.
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the television
a television
On the other hand
, television
can be used a
medium of providing Change preposition
as a
better
teaching experience to all Correct article usage
a better
people
around the world. People
at
all age groups can enhance the service of getting the Change preposition
of
information
about different topics presented by the individuals to everyone’s living room with no time
spent on travelling. This
provides them with the
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people
in community
as a better opportunity of sharing each other Add an article
the community
information
. For instance
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the government provides Add a comma
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facility
to their citizens on daily basis about lectures on different Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
devices
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device
usage
which provides themReplace the word
using
a
better chance to learn new technology. I believe, Add the preposition
with a
providing
the education facility through Correct word choice
that providing
television
gives the opportunity to all people
living in low mobility areas to involve where there will be no availability of internet service.
To conclude, although
some people
prefer to have television
as a medium of entertainment by getting the current information
on time
. I believe it will be viable to provide all generation
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generations
as
a mode of getting Change preposition
with
better
experience in changing ideas through teaching to all age groups.Add an article
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