Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is more useful for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some would argue that
television
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is the preferable medium which can be used for education, while
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others
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say it can be more useful for entertainment.
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television
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would bring the latest
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to your
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, I believe it will be more useful for getting teaching in remote areas. On the one hand,
television
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brings the opportunity of viewing the latest movies within a span of
time
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to your doors. When
people
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get frustrated after tireless hours of working at
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gives them the pleasure of viewing their
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stars
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television
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for
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mindful stress relief.
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, it provides room for
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a family
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reunion
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reunions
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between members while enjoying their preferable web series.
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, In the United States of America, families prefer to watch their all-
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favorite
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episodes of serials together at weekends which provides them
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better place for reunification.
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, I believe the
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spend in front of
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television
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the television
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for long hours will bring addiction and which should be avoided in life.
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,
television
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can be used
a
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as a
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medium of providing
better
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a better
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teaching experience to all
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around the world.
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at
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of
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all age groups can enhance the service of getting the
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about different topics presented by the individuals to everyone’s living room with no
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spent on travelling.
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provides them with
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knowledge database that can be used as a transfer of ideas between
people
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in
community
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the community
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as a better opportunity of sharing each other
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.
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, In
China
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the government provides
facility
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facilities
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to their citizens on daily basis about lectures on different
devices
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usage
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which provides them
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better chance to learn new technology. I believe,
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the education facility through
television
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gives the opportunity to all
people
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living in low mobility areas to involve where there will be no availability of internet service. To conclude,
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some
people
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prefer to have
television
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as a medium of entertainment by getting the current
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on
time
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. I believe it will be viable to provide all
generation
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generations
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as
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with
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a mode of getting
better
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a better
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experience in changing ideas through teaching to all age groups.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational programs
  • informative documentaries
  • interactive learning
  • entertaining content
  • reality shows
  • cartoons
  • intellectual development
  • parental guidance
  • screen time
  • creative thinking
  • educational potential
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