Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home, and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this will be a positive or a negative development.
Technology came to make our days easier and improve our quality of
life
. Although
it seems difficult to change traditional mores however
it is necessary to look ahead and go to the next
step. This
essay will argue how good can be the benefits of a children study
from home
and adults work by homeoffice
.
Correct your spelling
home office
First
it is important to see the prons about it, Add a comma
,First
such
as saving time doing the job or studying from home
. Nevertheless
, many employers dont
know exactly how it can be Correct your spelling
don't
usefull
the manly thing behind Correct your spelling
useful
this
thought is use
that saved time to spend with their family. Fix the infinitive
to use
For instance
, a skilled professional would love to have more time to go to a gym, to make their life
healthier. In
Addition
to Add a comma
,Addition
this
point
the company can innovate to keep good professionals working for them. Add a comma
,point
This
is because big techs already offers
it, Change the verb form
offer
therefore
, it looks hard recruit
Add the particle
to recruit
great employers
with not good benefits.
Yes, the points mentioned above offer strong arguments but Add the comma(s)
, great employers,
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
dont
Correct your spelling
don't
talk
enough Change the verb form
talks
how
Change preposition
about how
Add the particle
to study
study
at Wrong verb form
studying
home
and work make
Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
life
's student's
and employer's student Change noun form
students
such
a
awesome Change the article
an
life
. Thus
, self learning
is a terrific point to discuss. Add a hyphen
self-learning
For example
, learn about your own limits, what you are really good, what
you can improve, Change preposition
at, what
what
you are gifted Correct word choice
and what
but
do not know yet. Change preposition
at but
Furthermore
, there are
a lot of research explaining that work and Change the verb form
is
study
from Wrong verb form
studying
home
make you more productive. All in all, no ones
Correct your spelling
one
bothers
Correct pronoun usage
who bothers
yhe
employer can explain it in the Correct your spelling
the
most good
form possible, as more productive as more money Change the adjective
best
done
.
In conclusion, having their jobs and Add the auxiliary verb
did
has done
study
from Wrong verb form
studying
homeoffice
is not the future is the present moment, just need to get out of the big techs bubbles and Correct your spelling
home office
beginning
being used in medium or small Wrong verb form
begin
companys
.Correct your spelling
companies
company
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