Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Investigations demonstrate that the power of traits which we were born with is more than the power of our

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experiences in the formation of our personality and progress. I believe in the notion that occurrences which we

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during life are more significant. In the following essay, I intend to clarify

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point. It is a well-known fact that humans are born with characteristics that are inherited from parents and it is believed that these genetic traits affect a person’s activity in

such

a way that experiences can not do. I think

this

is not true as far as they are subject to change under living circumstances. In my opinion, there are factors that your living is affected by them. The most major agent is the environment, it is the key factor in the formation of our personality. To incite an example, someone who is narrow-minded or easy-going , because of some events in life may prefer not to be like

this

anymore. The other sample is a person whose perspective towards problems and happenings has been changed because of an accident.

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, experiences assist us to become more flexible when encountering difficulties.

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, students who are going abroad are facing a lot of issues,

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good and bad ones, but the more time

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, the more they learn how to deal with them.

For instance

, children in China have to work when they are so small. Not only do these situations prepare them for other harsh occasions later in life, but

also

enhance their interactions with other members of society and of course, their self-confidence definitely will be increased under

such

situations.