The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living Write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper: - Where did you hear this news and your opinion? - The reason why you protest it - Make suggestions for what people can or should do to stop the development

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kajol Dave. I live in saral street on 15
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and it is situated opposite
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the
park
where I live. I am writing
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letter to you because deeply disappointed to read about
this
news of
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the
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block of flats in the
park
location and hoping to find the other solution about the plan.
The
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park
is a
place
where people go there to
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exercise
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for their children to play.
This
park
has nearest to the home town and a good
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where all age groups
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preferedable
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preferable
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family
and friends. In the morning, it is crowded with
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lots of people who want to start their day with fresh air.
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, in the evening, it is almost filled with the families
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spending some quality time together. The
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best
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stress for all
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age
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people. I have written the petition to the requesting the local
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council
to stop
this
project and
also
organising the mass protest in front of
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council's
office.
Hence
, some of the local council
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decided to organize a
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protest
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in the
park
to raise awareness about the situation and increase more followers to prevent
this
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the plan. Yours faithfully, Kajol Dave
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