The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living Write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper: - Where did you hear this news and your opinion? - The reason why you protest it - Make suggestions for what people can or should do to stop the development

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kajol Dave. I live in saral street on 15

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and it is situated opposite

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the

park

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where I live. I am writing

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letter to you because deeply disappointed to read about

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news of

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the

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block of flats in the

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location and hoping to find the other solution about the plan.

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park

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is a

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where people go there to

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exercise

and relax and

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place

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for their children to play.

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park

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has nearest to the home town and a good

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where all age groups

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preferedable

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preferable

to spend their time with

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familiy

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family

and friends. In the morning, it is crowded with

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lots of people who want to start their day with fresh air.

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, in the evening, it is almost filled with the families

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spending some quality time together. The

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will be

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best

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to

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from

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the

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stress for all

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age

group

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people. I have written the petition to the requesting the local

councial

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council

to stop

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project and

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organising the mass protest in front of

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council's

office.

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, some of the local council

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decided to organize a

proest

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protest

priest

in the

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to raise awareness about the situation and increase more followers to prevent

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executionof

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execution of

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the plan. Yours faithfully, Kajol Dave